Just gone.
Sad ending. You do a great job of detailing Rainey's frustration with her husband's behavior.
Thanks, KC. I haven't decided if his point of view is going to justify her frustration, reveal her (or both of them) to be unreliable narrators, or something else. The ideas are simmering though.
Those are great ideas, especially the idea that both of them are unreliable narrators. We’ve only her one side so far.
This is so good and it left me dying to know what happened!
I think we'll be hearing from Mike's point of view sooner or later. :)
Really enjoyed it TK. This story is begging to be continued. Maybe? Great job. - Jim
Thanks, Jim. I originally planned to write it from Mike's point of view, so that might happen still.
I want answers about Mike! How can he just up and leave all of us like this??
Shandi, I'll probably revisit this from Mike's POV. I demand answers too. Like you, I have no clue. I'll have to write it to figure it out.
Sad ending. You do a great job of detailing Rainey's frustration with her husband's behavior.
Thanks, KC. I haven't decided if his point of view is going to justify her frustration, reveal her (or both of them) to be unreliable narrators, or something else. The ideas are simmering though.
Those are great ideas, especially the idea that both of them are unreliable narrators. We’ve only her one side so far.
This is so good and it left me dying to know what happened!
I think we'll be hearing from Mike's point of view sooner or later. :)
Really enjoyed it TK. This story is begging to be continued. Maybe? Great job. - Jim
Thanks, Jim. I originally planned to write it from Mike's point of view, so that might happen still.
I want answers about Mike! How can he just up and leave all of us like this??
Shandi, I'll probably revisit this from Mike's POV. I demand answers too. Like you, I have no clue. I'll have to write it to figure it out.